雅思写作，怎样让你的句子丰满起来？

下面通过四种方法的使用，举例说明英文句子变得丰满。

怎样解放思想，学习写好地道的英语？有些 同学 认为语法熟练就能够写好句子。语法操练只可以解决语言基本结构正确的问题。写好英语句子是与中国学生的汉语思维方式和下意思的汉语表达习惯有关。中国人在表达想法时倾向于抽象概括，从英文的角度看来，就是大而空。看来，要写好地道的英语句子，就要摆脱汉语思维的束缚，从意识上挖掘具体，细节与描述让你的句子能够丰满起来。本视频英语例句来自郑老师，杜老师新航道9分达人雅思写作。

下面通过四种方法的使用，举例说明英文句子变得丰满。
1.使用介词和介词短语能够引出细节；
2.举例说明能加强句子的客观性和说服力；
3.直接列举和排比句的使用；
4.试着去做进一步的解释，这样自然句子就丰满了；

通过介词和介词短语能够把你的想法和概念细节化。例如：

Original sentence:
They tend to be more independent, which is a very important factor and gives them an advantage.
Improved sentence:
They tend to be more independent, which is a very important factor in academic study and research, as well as giving them an advantage in terms of coping with the challenges of student lift.

Original Sentence:
These children are often spoilt by parents.
Improved sentence:
These children are often spoilt, not in terms of love and attention because working parents do not have time for this, but in more material ways.

Original sentence:
I totally agree with them.
Improved sentence:
I find myself in complete agreement with them with regard to experiences for new medicine.

Original sentence:
Physical punishments should be dealt with according to laws.
Improved sentence:
Physical punishments damaging the health of children should be dealt with according to laws regarding child abuse and physical assault.

Original sentence:
They are allowed to have everything they want and to do whatever they want.
Improved sentence:
They are allowed to have whatever they want, regardless of price, and to behave as they please.

举例说明是丰富句子常见容易的方法，增加了细节就可以加强句子的客观性和说服力。例如：

Original sentence:
A computer can not replace human interaction even if children use it for other things.
Improved sentence:
Even when children use a computer for other purposes, such as, getting information or emailing friends, it is no substitute for human interaction.

Original sentence:
There are many good programs on TV that provide us with different information.
Improved sentence:
There are plenty of well-made TV programs that provide viewers with information on such diverse topics as history, science, medicine, foreign languages and economics.

直接列举和排比句的使用能是句子丰满

Original sentence
Many people find their rewards unfair, especially when comparing these super salaries with those of other people.
Improved sentence:
Many people find their rewards unfair, especially when comparing these super salaries with those of top surgeons or research scientists, or even leading politicians who have the responsibility of governing the country.

Original sentence
Letters are more easily portable.
Improved sentence:
In spite of all this, there are certain occasions when letters are still the number one choice. The wedding invitations always seem more formal and sincere if hand-written; holiday cards with ink will often delight us more; and a carefully written love letter may intrigue or move your beloved one more easily.
试着去做进一步的解释，这样自然句子就丰满了

Talent is what distinguishes a person who has been trained to play a sport or an instrument, from those who become good players. In other words, there is. More to the skill than a learned technique.

More precisely, That is to say, Overall, I think the ability to keep a clear perspective in life is a more essential factor in achieving happiness. By that I mean an ability to have a clear sense of what is important in our lives and what is not.