雅思写作，怎样使用比较和对比句式？

How to use comparison and contrast sentences in IELTS Writing?

在雅思写作中，为了有效地表现内容，我们经常需要使用比较，对比的句式。通过内容的比较和对比，能够凸显你的文章主题。

本视频英语例句来自郑老师，杜老师新航道9分达人雅思写作。

比较句式：在阐述观点的时候，需要主动有意识地进行比较，能够恰当地使用比较级可以为你的雅思作文加分。
Original sentence:
Children will be confident and independent if they go to school from a young age.
Sample sentence 1:
They are generally more confident and independent than children who stay at home with their parents and who are not used to strangers or new situations.
Sample sentence 2:
Another advantage of going to school at an early age is that children develop faster socially.
Sample sentence 3:
I think the solution to the problem lies with the families, who need to be more aware of the future consequences of spoiling their children.

对比写法技能要超过比较技能，对比手法需要作者对于内容组织和语言表达能力要求更高些。

常用词汇：
Rather than
Instead/ instead of
Not… but..
Unlike
While/ whilst/ whereas

Original sentence:
Others think that spiritual paths are the only way to true happiness.
Improved sentence:
Yet others think that spiritual paths, rather than either the material world or relationships with people, are the only way to true happiness.

Original sentence:
My own view is that there is no major influence in one’s life.
Improved sentence:
My own view is that there is no one major influence in a person’s life, instead, the traits we inherit from our parents and the situations and experiences that we encounter in life are constantly interacting.

Original sentence:
That is to say the information in such commercials is very harmful.
Improved sentence:
That is to say the information in such commercials is far from useful, but rather harmful.
意思是说，这类商业广告中的信息远非有用，而是相当有害。