How to use comparison and contrast sentences in IELTS Writing?
Children will be confident and independent if they go to school from a young age.
Sample sentence 1:
They are generally more confident and independent than children who stay at home with their parents and who are not used to strangers or new situations.
Sample sentence 2:
Another advantage of going to school at an early age is that children develop faster socially.
Sample sentence 3:
I think the solution to the problem lies with the families, who need to be more aware of the future consequences of spoiling their children.
Instead/ instead of
While/ whilst/ whereas
Others think that spiritual paths are the only way to true happiness.
Yet others think that spiritual paths, rather than either the material world or relationships with people, are the only way to true happiness.
My own view is that there is no major influence in one’s life.
My own view is that there is no one major influence in a person’s life, instead, the traits we inherit from our parents and the situations and experiences that we encounter in life are constantly interacting.
That is to say the information in such commercials is very harmful.
That is to say the information in such commercials is far from useful, but rather harmful.
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